Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Discarded Headstones

Discarded Headstones
~Susan Martin, November 2, 2015

Here where broken pile on broken
Where marble stones and limestone
Crisscross together in a final, final resting place—
A place for remembrance, for collecting together the discarded, 

As though death were not enough
The threat of time further advanced a more fatal blow.
Forgotten.

Surely loved ones carefully selected 
The stone, the words, the size, its shape.
After all, what more can one do for mortal remains
Than to erect statues and tablets, signifying a final resting spot?

Imagine their dismay if, ages later, they were to return
To search for, but never find that grave so deliberately marked!
Or what if, in death, the specters of those passed were to rendezvous
At the haunts of those gone before?
Without this marker—without this label—how would they?

It is a good thing death is not such—
That these markers are merely comfort objects for the living
Not useful to those passed.

A good thing that, once lain to rest
Those bones, that dust
Does not need an identifier as it rejoins the stuff from whence it came.

And it is a comfort to think that
Once removed from our physical form
Our essence may engage each other
Void of any earthly marker—whether stone or bone
In the ether apart from atomic bliss.

Wednesday, January 18, 2017

...a few of my favorite things (revisited with age)


Corrugated heart unyielding
Folded on itself too long
Unfurls to embrace a moment
Can't recluse--closes loose

Stretched-pale balloons filled tight with whispers
Suspended midway yearn to rest
Gravity, the fatal temptress
On the ground--can't rebound

An hourglass of falling virtues
Slowly seeming strained through time
Turning toxic through its passage
Flipped on end--renewed again

~sfm 1.18.17

Friday, December 30, 2016

Pantoum Royale


"Together forever," he promised.
She knew it was, in fact, temporary
though he meant it at the time
(everyone means it at the time).

She knew. It was, in fact, temporary.
A quick kiss. A knowing glance.
Everyone means it at the time.
This time would be different.

A quick kiss...a knowing glance
... a whisper only they shared...
This! Time would be different.
As they sat side by side,

a whisper only, they shared.
Their confidence seeping
as they sat side by side.
"It is nothing," escaped his lips.

Their confidence seeping
(though he meant it at the time).
"It is nothing," escaped his lips
together forever. He promised.

~sfm 3.22.16

This is my first ever attempt at a pantoum, characterized by repeating lines and punctuation placement play.

Though interpretation is ever at the reader's discretion, this poem was constructed to honor the love story of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria and his wife Sofie, Duchess of Hohenberg, whose deaths on their 14th wedding anniversary are famed with stimulating the First World War. Though their relationship was controversial due to their different statuses in society, they loved nonetheless, dying slumped next to each other following a parade--the Archduke assuring his duchess until the end that his wound was "nothing" and encouraging her to stay alive for their children.

Intimacy by Default


We occupy same space, same time
Growing numb we grow apart
Effortless, this stale stalemate
Laissez-faire from the start

As days fade into nights and years
We waltz together, miles apart
We're better than alone, I guess
A grand illusory work of art

I suture wounds from my unrest
(If I exhale they'll rip apart)
Like tides heed not the sleeping sands
You wander through my hopeless heart

~sfm 9.27.16








Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Welcome!

Whining Poetry is a collection of poems I have written over the past several years.  I have shared many of them on Facebook, but I wanted a more permanent, public place to share and review and receive feedback.  I can't say why I abandoned my blog in 2011, except that around the time I stopped updating it I had a daughter, Alex, who has been the most poetic thing to ever happen in my life.

If you are reading my blog and care to give feedback, feel free to do so. I am always looking for new forms to try and new topics to dream upon, so it's great to hear from others.